~I had a...

Two dreams I had about two years ago... about different people.

I had a dream about kissing ‘someone’

In front of many people;

Our lips fitting like a puzzle

And our bodies connecting under the disco ball;

No one in particular staring

But noticing...

Y’know, just taking it in �" they who didn’t think I had it in me.

 

I had a fantasy about kissing another ‘someone’,

Yet it didn’t feel like betrayal...

You see, I’d go to him,

And like the lyric, “when I’m looking in your eyes”

Everything does fade away.

Suddenly, I’m pushing him against the foamed walls

And kissing him in such a way that I can’t get enough

And he is the same with me.

In another fantasy, we get to the stage where his shirt comes off

And he handles me tenderly, lovingly;

I run my hands all over him exploring new territory...

Unfortunately our time together in this fantasy is limited

So it all wraps up pretty quick,

But we haven’t gone below the belt... yet.

 

“I crave no other, nor better man.”

Author's Note

While restoring this writing, the quote at the end is from a book or play - I'm guessing "Measure for Measure" but don't quote me on that!

Reviews

[cheryl]

this is close to erotic

[V]

very interesting...had a prudish tone to it, like you were breaking rules you dare not break while awake...good stuff

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This was very well-written and romantic. It made me want to read more, which is always a good thing!

[Richard Hartshorn]

a very intersting look into the "first time," so to speak. Well-written and truthful, although the truth seems to have fabricated itself in the narrator's own mind, as all fantasies do. Good work.