~Untitled I

~Untitled I

A Poem by Clyde du Coeur
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Part one of the trilogy.

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I haven’t got anyone to dance with.”

“I’ll dance with you.” 


He whispers in my ear, “let me just go and put my drink down.” I nod and wait - who knows, he may not come back.

But he does... and we dance in full view of J, R and N to name a few.

We groove opposite each other.

Any chance of a twirl? I begin to wonder.

But he reads my mind.

He twirls me one way and I think I’m going back but he twirls as well and we end up close... very close. I look at him. He looks at me. Then it happens...


I tilt my head one way, as does he, but the opposite way so to link us. He opens his mouth and I open mine. He caresses my tongue with his own and we play ‘tongue twister’ for several seconds. I feel passionate heat rising as quickly as condensations spreads on the windows.


Almost automatically, we pull away in unison.

I smile at him, and he smiles at me.

He tells me he’s going to get a drink. I let him and feel dazed and happily confused as he walks away.

I feel a tap on my shoulder; it’s N congratulating me, and smiles all round.

Why?

  1. First pull of the night?

  2. My guy has a reputation with the ladies?

  3. It’s a rugby thing?!

© 2014 Clyde du Coeur


Author's Note

Clyde du Coeur
Meant to be a bit disjointed so that the reader can fully understand what was going through my head.

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Cute chapter but I must hurry to devour more...

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's good, vital and strongly descriptive...the eternal dance we all groove to at some time or another. Life, literally, dancing with itself in its endless greed to be.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on January 22, 2009
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Clyde du Coeur
Clyde du Coeur

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I love writing poetry, songs and stories. I like living life because events invite me to review them in a poetic way. I've always loved creative subjects like music, creative writing, photography, dra.. more..

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