~Trying to remember

Just something I wrote at 2am :P

 

Since you’ve been gone,

I find myself trying to remember the feelings experienced within a mere half hour…

I find myself trying to remember the adrenaline rush when you kissed me:

When your lips touched mine,

I fell into a state of bliss.

When your tongue caressed mine,

We both knew what we were doing; it was no mistake:

It was intentional.

How do you feel now? No one knows.

Even I don’t know how you feel…especially me…

“If he didn’t like me, why did he kiss me a second time? And the third, fourth, fifth…”

I find myself trying to remember how I felt…

But the more your absence drags on,

The more I forget.

 

Reviews

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

while i was reading this, i pictured this. This brought back memories of some guys that did that exact same thing. i really do like this.

[Angel Bird]

Here I got the 'Wow'-feeling! Definitely a great piece. While reading I had somewhat the impression as if I myself would experience that - you've done a brilliant job. Looking forward to read more of your work.

[Scott Eckert]

Well written and I can also relate...

[Nathan Duncan]

Yep, can totally relate, especially lately. Great stuff.

[Mark]

The words that escape at 2AM. The emotion and words are here, but a little raw sounding. For reason. Like it much. Good work.

[Akaila]

this is very good!!!! i really like the last stanza! that one stood out to me the most!!! seemed to really wrap it up very nicely!! well done!! really liked it!! good job!
~akaila~