Fairytale

We never had a fairytale.

No flame matches the fire

That surfaces, hot from the ire.

It’s your eyes that tell the story

Of us through the wire.

 

‘Once upon a time’

It stated, as if a rhyme.

But there was not going to be

‘Happily ever after’ this time.

 

‘This is your fault.’

Your lies seal me into a vault.

‘It was never a fairytale.’

The cliché came to a halt.

Author's Note

Just something to pass the time. Not really caring about it.

Reviews

[Amina.]

Very nice poem! I like the rhythm, and the rhyme makes it very special. A nice statement you're making ^^
Keep up the good work!

[Michael Carr]

I like it. it's a sweet piece. and you manage to create a rare rhyming poem that doesn't seem like doctor suiss from hell. it flows well and never feels trite and cliche or even forced.
witty and unique.

well done.