Baby, Blow My Mind

Your embrace felt so safe,
A feeling that felt so secure.
You were my next escape,
My next love that felt mature.

Pay attention this way,
Don’t go out of the lines.
Tell me everything is okay,
So, your heart beat defines.

Show me something different,
Make me feel alive!
My love language is very literate,
I want to see you strive!

I’m waiting for that solution,
Has it come across your mind?
Let’s see your contribution,
Let me know what you find.

Put me in a trance,
Like a music note.
Give me that romance,
I need you, my antidote,

Please blow my Mind…

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

Transient notes were spoken through each verse of your writing, your poem is such a romantic remedy, author Lizzy Morgan. Nothing's quite like a morning breeze of romantic melodies from lovely authors as yourself. And I must say, your rhymes ring meanings to me since I've grown up acquainted with such romantic tales, such nostalgia. Thank you for sharing your work.

[AaronCZim]

This is a very receptive poem from the very start and throughout. "Next escape," sound like if the subject is taken for a ride, that would be fine. I wonder what will be received this way, so the poem is like a mirror. When the poem looks at us, it's like a living poem. You've made a baby, a living poem. Good work!