Your so fake

Your so fake

A Poem by Eleanor

Your so fake

It makes me sick

It's like when we were little

And we used to play

Dress up

And pretend

 

But we all moved all

Or atleast most of us

It feels like

Your holding on

To those days

It's sad really

You can't be yourself

© 2012 Eleanor


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Perfection, it seems that you say what you mean!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am not sure what exactly you meant, though when i read this i think of when i was younger and how much i miss the times i had.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I know how you feel. I hate fakes. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Eleanor
Eleanor

New York, NY



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Hi! I'm Eleanor. I'm 18 and I live in New York. I love music and writing and yeah. If you really wanna know more, message me. One Direction, Cher Lloyd, Ed Sheeran, Olly Murs, Conor Maynard, The Wan.. more..

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