Chapter 2: March 10th-Liam

March 10^th 2011

So..Uh… My mom made me start writing in this journal. She doesn’t understand how it would ruin me at school if any of my friends found out. I would never hear the end of it. I would probably lose ALL of my friends. Expect Demi, she wouldn’t leave me for that. Sure she would tease me but never stopped talking to me. That’s why I like her. Like REALLY like her. I could never actually tell her my feelings though. She doesn’t feel the same way so it would make it so awkward. Plus she’s way too good for a loser like me. So that’s why I gave up all hope of us being together. I just try to not show my feelings when we’re hanging out, which is really hard. That’s how much I like her. She’s one of the only reasons I don’t give on people. Some days I think about telling her and I plan out exactly what I’m going to say, only to chicken out. I won’t ever have the guts to do it. Maybe I could send her a note saying what I want to tell her. Hm, that sounds like a good idea. Going to go do that now. So uh I guess I say bye now? I’m not sure how you are suppose to end these things……

--Liam (That’s how you end it right?)

Author's Note

So this is my first time trying to write like a guy...I don't think it's that good. It doesn't really sound like a guy. But whatever...What do YOU think?

Reviews

[jennifer little]

really well written good work keep it up

[ryssa]

Really Really well written.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was nicely written. It's a good try for writing like a boy. That's a good thing though. I like Liam and it's cute that he feels the same way about Demi. Good write. Thanks for sharing.