Thus we know

We all know reality dont we?

The simple fact of living,
'tis something like giving,
and we live on based on believing,
what a relief it is to be living,
the joy of achieving,
wipes away all grieving,
backbiting and deceiving,
because the simple fact yet,
of living,
as a community,
doing things and never judging,
and taking others by their apperances,
for mere appearances really lead us the wrong way,
let us all embrace the joy of living, believing, and giving,
then we could find strength together.

Author's Note

critics welcome...thanks

Reviews

[azlamalo]

its very nice...
i love this part-

the joy of achieving,
wipes away all grieving,
backbiting and deceiving,

it flows great