Nature

I write this outside a hotel in Ashland, OR.

As I listen to the sound

   of water

falling,

drip

drip

drip,

 I close my eyes,

 opening them

  to cast my eyes

          around

      the

grass,

    waiting

for

     my time

 to pass.

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

I really like this. I think that the simplicity, and the darkness, and the onomatopoeia in this are great.

[MomzillaNC]

Well that's rather… bereft. Sadly, there are many people only biding their time to their end, instead of embracing every day and living the miracles all around us.