Destroyed

Destroyed

A Poem by K.Butler
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a free verse poem

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The sky was grey
Not a cloudy 
Or foggy grey
 
But more of a dead grey

The pale ashy grey 
That tints the corpse’s skin

Most would think black 
More of a death colour. 

But most haven’t seen death. 

It isn’t black night
But grey ash. 

Life is a fire
Vibrant 
And growing
Some warmer than other flames. 

But the light grows weaker 
Until only char remains 

And ash is left.


The river was red. 
Rusty red
A mixture of blood 
And mud it seemed. 

It swirled around jutting rocks
Splashing at the bank. 

The bottom couldn’t be seen
Even in the shallowest parts. 

But then a branch of the muddy bloody red water split off 
To a deep pond
Pooling
Trapped. 

A wound
The escaping river unable to be returned
Weakening the river 

Until the flow stops.


The ground was black. 
A cloudy black
Cracking 
And crumbling

Unlike the beauty 
Held at midnight 
With the brilliant stars 
Dotting the blanket of night. 

The lack of light
The black a vacuum as of space
With no substance to hold

No green 
Or a splash of colour
It stretches across the bare floor
Seeming unlimited.

It devours all.

© 2016 K.Butler


Author's Note

K.Butler
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The poem carries some clear imagery throughout the whole poem... I enjoyed your use of vocabulary and the placing of words... That's the beauty of free verse, it allows us to touch many things without any pressure of following a rhyme or something... The image you were trying to create here I believe you have successfully created it... It reads beautifully....

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


K.Butler

8 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch!
There was lots of beautiful imagery in this poem. I saw a grey sky turn to sunset and then to night. Nice poem! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


K.Butler

8 Years Ago

Thank you!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I just love this!! Absolutely beautiful K.Butler!!!!!!!
Where were you all this time huh?!!!!
Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


K.Butler

8 Years Ago

Thank you! >>>>>

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Added on April 13, 2016
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Tags: grey, black, red, sky, ground, river, destroyed, dead, blood

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K.Butler
K.Butler

Spring Valley, OH



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