Blush

Blush

A Poem by Blood_knight3000

You’re here and I just can’t say

How happy I feel.

I look at you and

I know you can see through the charade.

You know how I feel.

My cheeks turn red,

Then it’s all given away.

You know what I feel.

My mouth says one thing,

My body portrays another.

In the end it’s just too hard to

Hide.

When I'm Blushing this way.

© 2011 Blood_knight3000


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That's a sweet poem. There's a rhythm to this poem that sends the reader right down to the next line- I like that. I can feel the smiley feeling you have and think of my own reasons to smile. The words are simple enough so even the very young will be able to read and therefore relate to this cute piece; accessible. Keep up the happy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That's a sweet poem. There's a rhythm to this poem that sends the reader right down to the next line- I like that. I can feel the smiley feeling you have and think of my own reasons to smile. The words are simple enough so even the very young will be able to read and therefore relate to this cute piece; accessible. Keep up the happy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 1, 2010
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Blood_knight3000
Blood_knight3000

Santa Cruz, CA



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