Unique And Free

I wrote this out of the blue, it may not be my best but here it is!

Unlike everyone, i'm

Not into "trends" and "whats in" 

I like using my own style and i'm

Quitting the organization of "Fitting In"

Unlike everyone, i stand out!

Everywhere i go,

 

All i see are people looking alike

No originality, no individuality

Doesn't that bother you?

 

Forget fitting in!

Rise up! Add some color to this black and white world

Erase the boundaries society created and

Enjoy your new life!

Reviews

[Annalisa]

This poem was cute. Not entirely original (is anything ever really original? hmmmm), after all there are a ton of poems acting as apologists for individuality but this was cute all the same.

I would suggest looking at the line "Rise up! Be the color of this black and white world" from the third stanza, I believe there is a typo. You've been saying be unique do something different and then all the sudden you say be boring like everyone else... so I'm not sure it that was intended.

But I really loved the line "Quitting the organization of "Fitting In"' That was really nice and got my attention as a reader...

So props for a job well done.

[Carl]

Love This Acrostic
add colour and dream out loud
Brilliant.

[pal]

a unique one..strong n bold
pal

[Bluet_Belle]

I like this. The message is great:)

[Kevin Reader]

this is fun...reminds me of activities we used to do with our names in kindergarten classes...

to make it more serious, perhaps try not to make the first letters of each phrase obvious, see how it changes the tone and argument of your piece

just thoughts!

[forfila]

Nice work sweetie, I feel the same way and you have captured the thought so well :)
Love it
Love you

=)

[H. A. M.]

Nice message for an acrostic.
I like what you said in this. It makes a person(me) look at behavior and check to see if I'm still in that 'organization.'
But I think they kicked me out long ago.
Oh well...
Good write and good message.

[JC Fox]

Lovely acrostic it was a little small but that's ok

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a terrific acrostic and I love how you wrote it. Great job!!!

Heather

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Wonderful acrostic and it flowed very well. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Amor-de-angel]

Never wrong to write whatever comes to mind, even if you think it's not your best, it's all experience. I like the colourful starts