Beauty Within

When will we open our eyes!

See me for me!

Don't look at me and say

"She'd be hotter if she lost some weight."

I am who I am

I'm not the barbie cliche

Some men want

I don't have blonde hair,

I'm not toothpick skinny,

And my b***s aren't double D's

Love me for me!

Don't compare me to others

Don't try to change me

Perfection doesn't exist,

Stop looking for it!

I'm may not be beautiful but,

I'm a smart,

Average looking,

Long, black hair

Chubby girl

I'm not ashamed of that

I know I can lose some

Weight, but why bother?

I like how I look

If you don't then

F**K OFF!!

Get away from me with

All that makeup, I'm not a clown

Don't even bring up Plastic Surgery,

I'm not your doll.

Love me for me.

Accept who I am

I'm not girlie,

I love watching football

Go Cowboys!!

I don't cry when I break a nail.

I don't wear high heels

And I prefer Jeans over dresses

I hate bright colors, I love wearing black

I listen to Rock Music, Metallica Rules!

I BURP!!

If you don't like it, then screw you!

There's an entire planet of people who will

So don't compare me!

And definately, don't try to change me!

Just see me for me

Love me...for me.

 

Author's Note

Just me venting! Hope you liked it! :)

Reviews

[Gary H]

The anger in this really came out well - also a feeling of watch out for who you are messing with because you are you and mean business. I think it's a good thing to write poems like this. Makes you feel stronger in that you have cleared your head of anyone pissing you off and have moved past that.

The strange thing is, on site's such as these, you get to know people more than you think - obviously you have revealed a whole lot more to us now!

Well done!!

[Amanda]

You go, girl! tell like it is and say what you mean! i love this rant of yours and it is fitting because that's the way i feel a lot of the time myself. it is always good to be yourself and like yourself for who you are...if others cant accept that, then forget them!

Love ya chica,

Mandy

[JC Fox]

I LOVE your room lol I love the purple walls, great job and you're right most of us are blind (me included) great poem.

[Jofer Serapio]

Well, your venting became a good motivation for this piece. I simply love how honest this write had become. The imagery is as vivid and true as the intricacy and the harmony are well developed. Keep up the good work.

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Here Here beautifully done and true!

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. So honest and pure. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[forfila]

I love you for you, your a beautiful girl in and out, I know that first hand. Nice vent sweet one.

Te amo mi amor
Love me