Beauty Within

When will we open our eyes!

See me for me!

Don't look at me and say

"She'd be hotter if she lost some weight."

I am who I am

I'm not the barbie cliche

Some men want

I don't have blonde hair,

I'm not toothpick skinny,

And my b***s aren't double D's

Love me for me!

Don't compare me to others

Don't try to change me

Perfection doesn't exist,

Stop looking for it!

I'm may not be beautiful but,

I'm a smart,

Average looking,

Long, black hair

Chubby girl

I'm not ashamed of that

I know I can lose some

Weight, but why bother?

I like how I look

If you don't then

F**K OFF!!

Get away from me with

All that makeup, I'm not a clown

Don't even bring up Plastic Surgery,

I'm not your doll.

Love me for me.

Accept who I am

I'm not girlie,

I love watching football

Go Cowboys!!

I don't cry when I break a nail.

I don't wear high heels

And I prefer Jeans over dresses

I hate bright colors, I love wearing black

I listen to Rock Music, Metallica Rules!

I BURP!!

If you don't like it, then screw you!

There's an entire planet of people who will

So don't compare me!

And definately, don't try to change me!

Just see me for me

Love me...for me.

 

Author's Note

Just me venting! Hope you liked it! :)

Reviews

[Gary H]

The anger in this really came out well - also a feeling of watch out for who you are messing with because you are you and mean business. I think it's a good thing to write poems like this. Makes you feel stronger in that you have cleared your head of anyone pissing you off and have moved past that.

The strange thing is, on site's such as these, you get to know people more than you think - obviously you have revealed a whole lot more to us now!

Well done!!

[Carl]

I like this angry agressive and RIGHT. We are all our own individuals tall small thin fat black white., its what comes from with in that matters. Yeah if you don't like me then. then ok. I will find someone who does. Love porty where the skin rips and anger floods out. and all it comes down to is four little words Love Me For Me. Awesome

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

very nice beautiful ery well written i love u

[pal]

so true

Just see me for me

Love me...for me.

pal

[Brandon]

Nice writeup. Definitely stay true to yourself. Be you.

[H. A. M.]

Out- frickin- standing!
Let em know who you are.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Yay, you go girl!!! This is an awesome vent and a great write. Nice work!!!

Heather

[Kara Emily Krantz]

WORD to that; i totally feel ya. i could have written this, i understood every word, and completely agree.

nice statement, my dear. i hope you believe it as strongly as you wrote it :) i know some days it's tough, but we must persevere

"Don't even bring up Plastic Surgery,

I'm not your doll."

ha i loved that

big hugs

[Ron Cole]

Hi Claudia!

That's telling them, Love! You've got all you need, and loads of talent too!

I once wrote a poem titled "Princess of The Gods". It was about the Gods having an art contest, and the winning god, when asked how he found his model, made this reply:

"And the winning God shook his head,
and, answering, he grinned
I found a lass who's beauty came
from without and from within!"

You have all the beauty you need, lovely lady!!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A great vent. A wonderful write and you are so right. If people can't love or accept you for who you are then your better off without those people in your life. Be yourself and stay true :)

Brilliant!!!

[Amor-de-angel]

Well hello Claudia...
I feel I know you so much better now, and guess what? I like you even more. Honest and truthful vent, never be something your not for anyone...Love yourself first then others will love you too.