Why did you do it?

what do you do when you do something that has a terrible outcome?

 

What happened to you?

When did you begin to fall apart?

This couldn't have been out of the blue

Was it because I broke your heart?

 

I just wanted some space

I didn't mean to cause heartache

Falling out of love wasn't the case

I just needed a breather for God sakes!!

 

You agreed to this as well!

All this time that went by...

Now you're putting me through hell

Leaving me here to cry

 

Why didn't you fight for me?

Why didn't you tell me to stay?

You let it all be,

You let me go away

 

And the letter, oh that letter

You left it right on your bed

"I hope your life gets better"

That's all it said

 

Where did you get that gun?

I didn't want this goodbye

I didn't want it to be done

Please, just tell me...why?

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

Oh, this brings tears to my eyes. Such powerfully tragic emotions run strong in the veins of this work. Hard it is when people do such selfish things like this, leaving behind unanswered questions and incomplete lives.
You captured this sad moment very well. I hope that time will bring new life into you, to help fill this painful void.
Hugs! :)

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

hmm whats this about? I think I know a better life will come your way keep hope and dreams close keep your heaart closer great write

[Reuben Porter]

This is another brilliant poem, I enjoyed it very much!

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Wow I can feel the dread and guilt in these words . Great write

[Prose-full]

wow...this is very powerful...
very nice emotion-filled write...