Why did you do it?

what do you do when you do something that has a terrible outcome?

 

What happened to you?

When did you begin to fall apart?

This couldn't have been out of the blue

Was it because I broke your heart?

 

I just wanted some space

I didn't mean to cause heartache

Falling out of love wasn't the case

I just needed a breather for God sakes!!

 

You agreed to this as well!

All this time that went by...

Now you're putting me through hell

Leaving me here to cry

 

Why didn't you fight for me?

Why didn't you tell me to stay?

You let it all be,

You let me go away

 

And the letter, oh that letter

You left it right on your bed

"I hope your life gets better"

That's all it said

 

Where did you get that gun?

I didn't want this goodbye

I didn't want it to be done

Please, just tell me...why?

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

Oh, this brings tears to my eyes. Such powerfully tragic emotions run strong in the veins of this work. Hard it is when people do such selfish things like this, leaving behind unanswered questions and incomplete lives.
You captured this sad moment very well. I hope that time will bring new life into you, to help fill this painful void.
Hugs! :)

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

So sad and tragic. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Fran Marie]

A powerful piece so well penned and expressed~Fran

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful and emotional piece... great job on this one.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow....this is a powerful poem. Great job!!!

Heather

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

what an emotionally charged and powerful write. You did a great job with this. It had wonderful flow and rhyme!
Brilliant!

[Jofer Serapio]

Wow... Thank you. You have a great way with words. This is a very compelling write. We can't always have what we want and when we realize that, we feel the greatest pain of not being able to do anything about it. Very powerful piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Fantasyfairy]

This is a powerful piece. It tears at the heart strings. Well written with just enough information to form a picture. Well done. XX

[Megan Wylder]

wow....thats all i can think to say. Its very emotional, without being to over powering. Great job.

[JC Fox]

This was a wrenching piece and very well written great job!