Now As One III: Free

Another one with my amazing friend Matt! I am in light purple and he is in blue, enjoy!

We head through a wonderland of beauty, where the flora stays in bloom and the fauna is always in tune. Walking hand in hand, such a place, such a time to be, here we are as one, the way it should be.

The wind blows into our faces filling us with so much creativity. The flowers filled our nostrils with sweet aromas and the grass was soft between our toes.

With every feeling so right, in heaven with an angel by my side, there is but one thing  that keeps us feeling bound. I turn and say, "Angel?"

His voice so serious. I look into his eyes, "Yes?

"Do you feel like I?"

I grab his hand and smile, "Such a silly question to ask. You know I feel the same. What makes you think otherwise?"

"It is just, we are so happy, so sure and so content, but i feel like we are hiding something. Do you understand?"

I place a hand upon his cheek and smile, "Yes my love, I do understand."
Her smile ignites one of my own across my face. "I love you, I think we are ready to walk free."

I begin to unbutton my shirt, as I remove it from my body, I begin to show him the soul within.

I see her aura clense and eyes glow. Her skin is no longer my sin. I remove my rags covering my chest. I back into her eye contact for it is here I am now relaxed.

I have finished removing every piece of my clothing, I stand before this beautiful man bare to the bone. I am showing him that I am more than just name brand clothing, I am showing him that I am just his angel.

I watch on as she casts her clothes into the past of forgotten memories, I too am bare before this angel. I am so proud of her, so in love with her. I extend my hand to her.

I accept his hand without hesitation. He has opened up a whole new world to me, a world I was scared to explore. He has shown me what it is like to be free.

Together we have found the pleasure of basic and true purity. We walk, I turn, "Thank you Angel."

I turn to look into his gorgeous face, "No my love, thank you."

 

Author's Note

No its not about sex!!

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful collaberation.....the bearing of souls!

Brilliant!

[Carl]

Brilliant peice. Behind the tags the brands the clothing. Lies the one thing that makes us tick. Our soul. I liked the way you both put across the point that if we are going to be together then you must know everything that i am. I am plesed you picked the perfect time to reveal yourselves to each other
great work

[pal]

no its not about sex.. just sharing of two souls
great.
pal

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

A great collaboration. I love the imagery of this piece. Beautifully penned.

[Gary H]

Nicely done. I see you both have your own expansive parts in this that work through the poem. I wondered how this was going to go when I saw the first lines from each of you, but you have worked hard on making this a good piece.

There is nothing to give the idea that this is about sex, just a lust for each other with true togetherness.

[Joseph - Michael]

I know that it doesn't have to be about sex, it does mean many things from what the readers chose it to be. Personally, I pick sensuality, so no worries

Other than that, it's nice and smooth, so it's still all good...

[Sean M. Addams]

very impressive collaboration on this piece .... lots of nice imagery and good flow...

[Amanda]

beautifully written...i again got hit up by both you and matthew on this...lol. it's all good and i reviewed you both. it is a very nice ending to the other two that you both collaborated on. a good write, good job.

Love Ya,

Mandy

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, beautiful write. Well done to the both of you!!!

Heather

[Jofer Serapio]

Haha. This made me laugh. I was indulging in the richness of the imagery when I came across the Author's Note. It made me laugh that much. As for the collaboration, it's not that bad. It's wonderful. Thank you for sharing.