Spiritual Angel!

Spiritual Angel!

A Poem by Dead Angel
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To a special friend!!

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Out of nowhere this friend did appear

Offered me his hand and love

And wiped away my tears

 

This angel found me when I was lost

Lent me an ear and a shoulder to cry on

He even warmed my heart from the bitter frost

 

Our thoughts are always in tune

A friend like him only comes

Once in a blue moon

 

Its deeper than a romance

We're just two souls

In a spiritual dance

 

He listens to me and I listen to him

We both have our problems

Our lives are just as grim

 

We give each other hugs and hold each others hands

We share so many interests and

Even like the same rock bands :)

 

This angel saved me from my perpetual night

He took my hand and guided me

To the eternal light

 

He's a world away but always close to my heart

He brought my life together

Just as it was falling apart!

 

© 2008 Dead Angel


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A very posivive and uplifting piece, its good that you found someone when things weren't going so well. A wonderful tribute to him for being there for you. I hope he gets to read this.

Brilliant!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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Cool peice of work. a touching peice that makes me feel that Angels really do exist.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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wonderful tribute a soul friend.

nice poem indeed.

pal

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful poem and really enjoyable. One line though spoilt it for me - 'Our lives are just as grim' - that seemed to be there because it rhymed with 'him' - forgive me if I am wrong. An alternative? I would have 'To avoid falling into sin' - note: I would take out the 'our' from the previous line.

Anyway, that's my take on the read. Really liked the colour, guessing this is refering to the 'blue moon'?

Greatly uplifting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was real nice! A pick me up after the other poem about the suicide.
This makes me appreciate the friends I do have.
Good one miss!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That's what real friends are for, right? Out of my entire life, I've only known a few people like that. The rest are full of s**t one way or another

Anyway, it's a real nice writing you got there and it brought my mood up, so thank you for sharing this...


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

beautiful and congradulations

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ooh, this is a lovely write for your friend. Wonderful job!!!

Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very uplifting piece ... everyone needs a friend like this .... it is always cool to have someone there when you need them.... very postive piece ... put a smile on me...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful piece! Thanks for sharing. As simple as the overall theme may appear, there is an underlying truth in your work. Of course, we all know that that is the fact that no matter how alone you may feel, there will always be someone who will share your pain and help you heal. I needed that. thank you very much.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I had been bored, tired, and feeling down all day, then I read this piece and it brought my spirit up so much, thanks for the read request! lovely poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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