Diary of a Broken Girl: Day 16

Diary of a Broken Girl: Day 16

A Chapter by Dead Angel
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Has our lost Dove finally found home?

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    It’s 12 pm and Kat is heading to her first day at Buck’s Diner. She was a bit nervous since she has never waitress in her life; she was a hostess once, but no for very long. As soon as she arrived, Buck was quick to put her to work.           

    “Oh Kat you’re here, good. This is Maggie and she’s going to train you.” A girl, no older than Kat, came from behind Buck. “Ok, I’ll leave you two at it then.”            

    “Alright let’s get started. Um…I'll start by showing you around and then we’ll go through the menu together. Ok?” she said with a smile.           

    “Ok.” Kat replied with a smile as well. It felt strange for her to do so since she had nothing to smile about for the past few weeks.           

    Maggie finished showing Kat around the diner, where the clean dishes were, and where the dirty dishes went. She then went thoroughly over the menu and gave her a few practice runs on taking orders.           

    After awhile Kat got the flow of things and was off for lunch. Buck gave her a free meal, since it was her first day and all. She took it and sat in a booth towards the back of the restaurant. She took out her notebook once again and began writing.

 

     Dear Journal,

    Well things seem to be lifting up, I got a job at a quaint little diner; I’m making good money what with tips and all. It’s only been a day and I can’t help but think that I belong here. Buck, my manager, has been nothing but nice since I arrived and even talked Betty, the manager at the hotel I’m staying at, into giving me a room for free. This town is so nice, I don’t think I’m going to be leaving anytime soon. I may have finally found that something I’ve been looking for, I may have found home.

 

    Kat closed the notebook and for once in a long time, she felt happy.

 



© 2008 Dead Angel


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Good continuation. Cant wait to read more!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm, I'm glad things are going better for Kat, but you know, it almost seems too good to be true. I'm curious to read the rest.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yay! I'm so happy for Kat. A little piece of pleasure and kindness from strangers does wonders to lift ones soul. I know all about it. Another excellent installment.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes more ... it is an interesting play of life from the Journal perspective.... I find the moments you capture in the Journal drawing me into the character, becoming her ... write on!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, but i think you cut yourself short on this part. I think it needs more in order to complete the chapter...
ONe!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great continuation to a really good story. Nice work!!!

Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is this the calm before the storm? I wonder.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another great installment in this story.. I have been enjoying this

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that the town as come together for her

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's cool that you have more and I am thinking I should have read this part before I read the other part but its going good so far

Posted 16 Years Ago


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