Claudia

Its about me

Creative girl who's constantly

Lost in thought and looking

Around for inspiration and her

Uniqueness and individuality

Displays around her

Inside and out making

Anyone around her envious

 

Author's Note

some may think its a little narcissistic, i like to think of it as having a lot of confidence

Reviews

[Cat O'nine]

I like the way this spells the name out with action words, it makes it sound more alive. Its easier to find an adjective for a person (tall, short, blonde) than it is to give them movement. i think in this case it is much more appropriate to give 'Cladia' a three dimensional feel, as she exists not just in flesh but in the world of creation. I would, however, like to see a poem of similar style follow it that mirrors the day-to-day self with one more secret, perhaps using 'Claudia; spelled backwards and written just below it.

[Celtic Cat]

I was going to say "You're right!"... then I read the Author's note and must say, not narcisstic at all. I've known them, and you come across as a most giving soul, not narcistic at all. Excellent piece.

[pal]

No dear claudia.. we are not certainly envious
"Displays around her;Inside and out making;"Anyone around her envious"

we are with you.. enjoying every moment of yours..
pal

[Joseph - Michael]

Naw, it's not that much of the narcissistic, you're just having fun with yourself to gain more of the confidence in yourself, so you're fine like always.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, eventhough it may be almost too simple to read, but you always left some important messages shown instead of hidden...

[Sean M. Addams]

very creative piece... very unique...I really like the style of the poem... acrostic are fun to write and you did it well... might try one with my name:)

[JC Fox]

LOL a little narcissistic? its all good though great acrostic!

[John Stussy]

I think of it as the same. If you have the skill which you obviously portray in your writing, you ought to take pride in it. Great work, it really defines you as a writer.

[Fran Marie]

How very Creative~ I really like how you did
this ~a very well Crafted Acrostic Write indeed!!
~Fran Marie

[Yaooooooo]

So what can you say about JOSE? LOL.
I dont know how people can create so much out of a few letters.
I know i couldnt do it, is challenging, but i cant express myself in just 5 sentences, i need a few pages but i try to keep it down to one. I know that not everyone wants to read more than one page of pain and sadness without getting bored or loosing the meaning of whats going on.
Thanks for the request, and keep them coming
look forward to reading more in the near future....
Overall it was a good read
One!

[James Mayfield]

It's always good to have confidence. Many of us have much too little. I like the addition of the double acrostic. This is usually my kind of piece but I like the crafting of it. I can't seem to pull off an acrostic without running out of room. Sorry I took so long to get to this, thanks for sharing.