Moon

Playing with words again

Most beautiful

On a clear

Open sky and

Never loses its brightness

 

Reviews

[James Mayfield]

It's a nice play on words. Clear and concise. I wasn't really expecting another acrostic but I like this one. Some words are best used for multiple word acrostics I think. This would do well with some expansion. The moon has so much to offer as inspiration that four lines really doesn't do it justice. But that's just my opinion. Thank you for sharing.

[John Stussy]

And once again, fun to read. In so few lines you describe very well an object that has captured my fancy many times. :)

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful Acrostic poem soon nicely expressed~ Well DonE!!~Fran Marie

[Stacy A. Foster]

I could picture this in a sweet children's book with a lovely picture of the moon behind it. My daughter would love to say it and it would teach her what an acrostic is and what it can do for the reader.

Simply nice!
Stacy :)

[Amor-de-angel]

Maybe you should challenge yourself and try a longer word, nice acrostic.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Another great acrostic!!! Boy, you're good. ;) Wonderful job!!!

Heather

[Joseph - Michael]

Again, you are playing with the words very well along with the colored fonts like that. It's kind of short, but it's still good...