Moon

Playing with words again

Most beautiful

On a clear

Open sky and

Never loses its brightness

 

Reviews

[James Mayfield]

It's a nice play on words. Clear and concise. I wasn't really expecting another acrostic but I like this one. Some words are best used for multiple word acrostics I think. This would do well with some expansion. The moon has so much to offer as inspiration that four lines really doesn't do it justice. But that's just my opinion. Thank you for sharing.

[Celtic Cat]

Love your
Ode to our
Velvety orb
Evening out the sun
Lighting up the stars
You did it justice.!!

[Brette Medb]

The moon is by far the most beautiful and magical thing this world has to offer, especially on a cold winters night when the moon is full and the air is still... wonderful write!


Brette

[pal]

short, yet too sweet.
pal

[Yaooooooo]

I like these short poems, but mybe you should of chose more than one word for this. I feel like it was too short and i need more to get in, more feedback before you hit me with the grand finally...
Well, thanks for sharing and thank you for the request
keep them coming and i hope to read more in the future....
One!

[H. A. M.]

This is the first of the three acrostics I read and I get to watch you evolve with it. Only it's in reverse but still good to see.

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

another wonderful acrostic... these are so fun I think. I love doing Acrostics.

[JC Fox]

I agree you did an awesome job on this

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Cool very well done. The words not only play in perfect with the letters in word MOON, but explain it as well.

[Jenny Davis]

I so love the moon and you have captured its essence wonderfully in this 'play on words' piece :)