The One and Only

We all take advantage of this

How I miss you!
Your soft gentleness and
The way you make me feel
After a rough day.

How you keep me warm at night
And make me feel safe
Even through the toughest of storms.

I love the way you smell
After a good wash and
How warm you feel.

I love how relaxed I am
When I fall into
Your sweet embrace.

You were there when
I went through some hard times.

I wish I was with you now
Instead of this boring classroom.

My love...
My escape...
My bed!!
ZZZZZZZZZZZ

Reviews

[JC Fox]

Mmm I love my bed too, and sleep is such a wonderful friend! Great poem!

[Cherish Blackwell]

I truly agree.. I love my bed too. :)

[BrightEyes]

LMAO! How wonderful! There are days when I truly miss my glorious bed while at work! Which, by the way....Shhhhh! I'm sneaking on from there now lol. A very creative and fun write!

laura :-)

[Ron Cole]

Ha! Had me going there gal! This is cute and "tricky", and has a great story and structure! Nice work!

[Michael Soul]

longing to be by the side of one you love is always on going
even when there just out the door

good babe

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

LOL.. you tricked me .. a good twist at the end.. my bed. i love it lol
our beds are a safe haven, aren't they?
Love your poem , Claudia.

Chloe
xoxo

[Amor-de-angel]

Love that feeling of a freshly made bed...spreading out and mmmmmmmmm

Nice write,you had me fooled at the start too.

[Shantanu]

Hehe. Great write. Kept the reader guessing till the last moment. And I'm suremost of us went down the wrong path. Its quite differnt and light and I liekd it becoz of that

[Alex]

lol,yeah ...loved it .....that me ...lol my bed ...lol
thank you for sharing :)

[Whisperer]

Well, it made me smile! I liked the honesty in this piece, which coupled with the humor leaves a smile of the readers face!! :-)