My Little Haiku 2 and 3

Haikus i just finished. Enjoy!

 

 

 

Tiny Little Leaf
Changing Colors In The Wind
Fall Has Now Begun

 

 

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Protects Me From Harm
Wings Fluttering In The Wind
Angels Are With Me.

Reviews

[Randall Richard]

i don' tthink of myself as a haiku guy, but when they work, when they are exceptional, they hit me hard. these two fit in that catagory whell. perfect

[Morgan A Lynch]

yes this was very sweet and u did a great job..

[Stacy A. Foster]

Ah yes... I'm feeling this one. The picture is lovely and Fall is here. The air is so very fresh, it's my favorite time of the year and you captured it marvelously in only a few lines.

Lovely!
Stacy

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done..second one is my fav but both are good..

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

This is very simply yet complex.

[Ivory]

They are both well written Haiku's.
I do prefer the first over the second one.
The second one seems more like a senryu.
Good write : )

[H. A. M.]

I like the first better than the second only because it's seasonal. The second one is nice but the first sticks with me better.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a lovely delicate work. It too flutters in the breeze. Cheers.

[Amor-de-angel]

Very sweet. Love the first one and despite what adamdust says they are good!
Well done

[Jonathan Bryant Dean]

Haiku are so simple on the surface, but when done right, they are infinately complicated.

These are both nice.