My Little Haiku 2 and 3

Haikus i just finished. Enjoy!

 

 

 

Tiny Little Leaf
Changing Colors In The Wind
Fall Has Now Begun

 

 

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Protects Me From Harm
Wings Fluttering In The Wind
Angels Are With Me.

Reviews

[Stella]

Nice haiku! Well written. Good work! :)

[Kimmee Jean]

awww! i heart these!

[DOMI']

Sweet nice piece of writing. short but beautiful. the falling of leaves, angels's wings, the arrive of autumn, angels's wings keep you warm for the winter,
Very good, love, Dom xxx

[Celtic Cat]

Very sweet! Good job, Claudia!!!

[Kitty Cat]

simple, lovely, and sweet.
what a wonderful poem.
my favorite lines are
"Tiny Little Leaf
Changing Colors In The Wind "

[Pema Dorje]

sweet... flutter fly with wings of Sun! a masterly write

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

love the angels one... so very perfect...
over all great writing on both

[Michael Soul]

works in a way you dont exspect nice work

[S.j. Garcia]

great haikus! i don't see many of these, and i really appreciate you sending them to me. there's nothing quite like a good haiku.

[Sunny]

Liked both of them