Realization #2

Fear the life not worth living,

then live without fear,

and love without limits;

the message is clear.

 

We all have due time

to do with what we may,

and I solemnly swear,

until my dying day,

 

to fear only the living

and live without fear,

and love without limits,

in case limit is near.

 

Author's Note

Thoughts, please!

Reviews

[Kris]

There's naught better than a poem that makes one reevaluate their life, and this piece did a good job on that part. I love it!

[Meesh]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Rita L. Sev]

This is an excellent philosophy - if only we all lived this message. Simple format works well and flows nicely.

[Meesh]

hopefully everyone else who reads this will approach the same way you have :) Thanks for the review!

[Pryde Foltz]

Wise words, my friend, wise word.

[Anand Sehgal]

Fear the life not worth living,

then live without fear,

and love without limits;

the message is clear.

brilliant :)

[Fahmida]

A very beautiful poem. Plz read mine too. ^_^

[Archangel Gabriel]

A very sage poem containing a wise message. Flows well but middle stanza might be a little out of 'key'?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A nice flowing poem with a great message. second stanza made me struggle a little as it didn't flow so easily, perhaps:
'We all have due time
to do as we may,
and I solemnly swear,
til my dying day,'