Broken

Silently crying constantly. As I walk around mentally, physically, and emotionally crippled. Do you hear me screaming? Do you hear the pain and suffering that I bear? Off course not. Why would you for you do not even hear me as I speak. For all you do is brag about me. Do they know the instability you brought? Do they know how much I’m broken now because of you? Or better yet do you care as I scream my lungs out hoping that someone could hear my plea for help damaged?

Reviews

[Richy Moon]

This poem realy drives alot of emoation for it's small size. Confused and angry, for sure, and maybe lost in the world. I like it, because I think everyone's had that mix of confusion anger and a feeling of nowhere to turn.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Amazing, this is really deep and well-written! I love how it asks constant questions to get the point across. Great job. Keep up the good work! :)



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