This feeling

The feeling of FINALLY being at peace

No longer caring about stress

but instead enjoying life to its fullest.

Is it REAL?

or is it just a figment of my IMAGINATION?

An illusion created by the despair i suffered so far?

That feeling of HAPPINESS,

smiling a real smile from ear to ear

instead of something fake.

Do i enjoy these feelings

i do not know yet, but i 

do know that i'm DONE with all.

Author's Note

been a while. would like critiques and anything else plz

Reviews

[Tunder]

This is highly intriguing because you say that it is a real happiness, but you can't even enjoy it because you're not sure if it's just an illusion. Nice write!

[quinfinn]

makes you wonder if you are stress free and feeling at peace why do we wonder if it is genuine or fleeting. clever write!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

When you feel like that - peaceful, grinning ear to ear - don't doubt it! Take it when you can and learn to make it happen more often. :) Life can't always be happy and stress free, but I believe we can try to reach a place where we have a peaceful core that is steady through life's storm. Only one thing to ask - the last stanza gave me a bit of pause - not sure on this and wonder if you could search your heart and find a clearer way to express it...that's just my thought to take or leave.

[Ayanda Mteto]

emotiions are so vivid in your write, "the feelings" we can only hope they are true with doubts harvesting our mind.

[Richy Moon]

Nice poem! Definity reflects that awsome feeling of being stress free and enjoying it! I like it :)

[washed_up_writer]

Wonderful this. This is true free verse and what's great about this is that it possesses that rare authenticity. Your confusion is clear though I'd have loved to read what caused you to ask yourself such questions

[Clare the Artist]

thanks & i see that your an anime fan as well. FullMetal Alchemist