In the mirror scene 2

Boy #1

 ( Boy walks around room nervously. Muttering to himself some sort of background music can be played. He is dressed nicely for a date with his girlfriend who he plans on proposing to Ring box is in his pocket)

Boy: (practicing asking. Kneels differently each time)  Carol, will you marry me. No That’s not right(trying again differently)  Carol Will you marry me.

(walks over to mirror to fix his already styled hair)

Reflection: She is going to say yes

Boy:  I know………You sure?

Reflection: Seriously how long have you known Carol? 5 maybe 6 years

Boy:  yeah but

Reflection: No! No buts she is going to say Yes

Boy: Ok I can do this

Reflection: Yeah you can

Boy: Oh god What if she laughs

Reflection :(scolding)  She is not going to laugh at you

Boy: I know. I just keep imagining the worst things possible

Reflection: Do you Love Carol

Boy: Yes

Reflection:  Does she love you

Boy: I’m pretty sure

Reflection:  Well there ya go then

Boy: What am I going to say (Clears thought and says directly to himself in the mirror) Carol we have known each other for a long time now. You are beautiful smart and funny, more than I deserve, I love you with all my heart Will you please Marry me ?

Reflection: (clapping and cheering) perfect,. You’ve got this

  Boy: Ok (looks at watch) Oh shoot I’m going to be late I told Carol I would pick her up at 7:00.

Reflection: Good luck!

(Lights go down as Boy exits. But come back up with him standing in the doorway.)

Boy: (to girl hidden behind door frame) Carol, I have known you for since I was 10 and I have known that I loved you since I was 12, you are smart beautiful and kind, everything I ever hoped for (one Knee down while opening ring box form pocket) Will you Marry Me

Carol: Yes

(Black out)

 

 

Author's Note

so i am not a boy am trying to make this as realistic as possible if you are a boy who har proposed
please let me know what you think
any comments or sugestions would be greatly appriciated
Thank you