Rebirth

Again an old poem of mine. I really don't know what I was thinking when I wrotes it. It's pretty abstract. No set form.

 

Nightfall
The golden light of sunset wanes-
Fades to darkness.
Starlight-
Twinkling from above
Dotting the heavens-
Magic and wonder.
For a moment life settles
into height- resting without a care.
In the comfort that tomorrow will
Bring the sun, and life will start anew.

Author's Note

Thanks so much. I hope you liked the effects of the choppy style, if not let me know. Let me know if I missed a grammar error please.

Reviews

[Jules]

This is a really pretty poem! I think the choppy style works in this poem, it adds something extra to it. It really did remind me of rebirth.