In the Car with Him

In the Car with Him

A Story by ClaireMcFall

“Stop the car!”

It was meant to ring with authority, but on the final word Ailsa’s voice cracked with panic.  As the car slunk at a maddeningly casual speed along the midnight black road, the streetlights illuminated her face in flashes.  Her eyes were rimmed red with crying, one cheek swollen red.  The teeth that worried her bottom lip seemed oblivious of the deep split sending a thin trail of blood running down to the sharp point of her chin.  Each pool of light that blazed through the window had just enough time to reveal a dress ripped at the shoulder and thigh, revealing skin dotted with dirt and jagged scrapes, before darkness engulfed the back seat of the car once more.

The man in the front seat ignored her.  He had not spoken a word since he had manhandled her into this claustrophobic space where the doors wouldn’t open, the windows wouldn’t roll down, and an impenetrable wire mesh hung between the back seat and him. 

Ailsa squirmed in discomfort.  Her hands were bound behind her, pinning her shoulders back, stretching the muscles in her shoulders and arms until they ached.  Her wrists were wet, slick with sweat that made the raw skin sting as she twisted and pulled at her restraints.  Her legs, however, were free.  Sliding down on the seat, she lifted one naked leg tipped with a gleaming pink stiletto, and kicked out at the window.  The slippery fabric of the seat and jolting rumble of the car as it bobbled along the uneven ruts of the road worked against her, and the blow glanced off the glass, the point of her heel barely managing to scratch at the glass.  The mesh, she knew, would bend more easily to her will, but she didn’t want to get any closer to him.

“Stop that!” his voice whipped from the driver’s seat.  Dark eyes, narrowed in anger, glared at her from the rear view mirror.  She stared back, defiance momentarily over-riding fear as she raised her foot for another attempt.  Her gaze travelled from the mirror to where his hands gripped the steering wheel.  Large hands, strong; they had fought against her struggles as if her thrashing limbs where as fragile as a flower stem.  His arms, too, were powerful; thick bands of muscles bulging against the black jacket he wore.  Her courage quailed in the face of his strength.

“Please let me go,” she pleaded, her face screwing up beseechingly as she shuffled back into an upright position.  “I haven’t done anything.  Please.”

She was not too proud to beg.

She watched the mirror for his reaction.  He appraised her for one, long moment, eyebrows lifting slightly at her words, before turning his attention back to the road, dismissing her.

“Let me go!”

This time her voice was a scream, erupting from her throat.  Desperation took control of her muscles, and she slammed sideways into the door, jarring herself before the next lurch of the car sent her flying back across the length of the seat.  Her hair sprang out from the elegant French roll, falling haphazardly across her face.  She spat tresses from her mouth, hauling air into her lungs, ready to scream.

“Ailsa Clark!” he snapped.  “You are in enough trouble as it is.”

The breath froze in her lungs. How did he know her name?  Then she realised: hands had dug through her pockets as they roamed over her body, searching.  He must have looked in her purse. 

She was young still, not quite a woman despite the height of her heels and layers of make-up, now streaked down her face.  Or perhaps because of them.  Either way, her childlike eyes saw only one more choice.  Welling up until they shimmered in the darkness of the car, they began to cry.  Tears coursed down her cheeks, cutting tracks through the doll’s face she had painted to hide her own.  Her breath came in ragged gasps, soft squeaks of misery hiccupping from her mouth.  She looked hopefully towards the mirror, wondering if her cries might melt his stone facade.

He didn’t even bother to meet her gaze.  Instead he sighed, and Ailsa understood the sound for what it was: the door slamming closed on her hopes of escape.  Unable to control herself, she continued to weep softly as the miles flew under the wheels of the car.

When the harsh light flooded into the cab of the car, Ailsa had finally fallen silent.  She watched as the man smoothly manoeuvred the car around the tight space, parking in front of double doors.  Looking up, she took in a grey, non-descript building, square and forbidding.  It seemed to loom over her, threatening to swallow her whole.  She shivered.  In one fluid movement, the man slunk out from behind the wheel and grabbed the rear door handle, pulling it open.  Ailsa sat where she was, jammed as far from the man’s reaching hands as possible.  She heard him give an annoyed grunt before he leaned in, grabbed her upper arm, and dragged her across the vinyl seat and out into the blinding light.  Squinting, trying to get her bearings, Ailsa let her body go dead weight, dropping to the floor.  He muttered angrily under his breath, but she ignored this, going as limp as a rag doll. 

Suddenly, the double doors opened and another man stepped out.  He was identically dressed in black.  Ailsa’s heart sank: she could not fight two of them. 

“What have you got there?” the second man called. “Need some help?”

“Just a Drunk and Disorderly,” came the reply.  “Cat fight in a pub.”

Eyes narrowed to angry slits, green eyes gleaming, Ailsa could do nothing but let the two men drag her inside.

© 2011 ClaireMcFall


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