Students on Monday

Students on Monday

A Poem by Claire in VA
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My students act differently depending on the day of the week. Maybe all people do!

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Students


quiet, calm


reading, studying, daydreaming


sweet children who do as they're told


Pupils

© 2014 Claire in VA


Author's Note

Claire in VA
In my experience, on Mondays, students are quiet and sleepy after a wonderful weekend. By Friday, they are lots more vocal and LOUD!! They wake up bit by bit each day of the week. Then they start over after weekend activities.

Comments are appreciated!

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yes, they are like this...serious...back to the grind...

you capture them on the days of the week...perfectly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the feel of it. Short poems are often overlooked by people. I think it is harder to make them work. As Poe put it when referring to writing short stories, "put in every word required, but not one word extra." Each word carries more impact and becomes a crucial part of the whole. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

10 Years Ago

Thanks Michael. Please come back.
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Informative, simple, and to the point. Good job Claire-Levi

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comments!!

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Added on February 4, 2014
Last Updated on February 4, 2014
Tags: students, kids, school, teachers, children, personalities, behavior

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Claire in VA
Claire in VA

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I am here to read a lot and write a little. I love, love, love to read! I love English. I love poetry, history, and historical fiction. I teach fourth grade. I play piano at church. I love all.. more..

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A Poem by Claire in VA