Finding the light

Sometimes I fall into a hole

And it’s not about getting out

It is about finding the light inside

Reviews

[Jack...]

Your words have illumined my eyes. Very cool.

[Hannah Jocks]

Short, simple and amazing. This has a fully true message. Great job!

[B-poet]

This is a short interesting poem. You have to fall down to find inspiration to get up.
Nice work. I like how you get your point across

[Sujash I. Purna]

says so much in a wee little verse! good work!

[TC Dunn]

great poem about looking on the positive. Everyone should take this message to heart, especially when they're going through a hard time. Very inspirational.

[Emrick]

mhhh.hope the way am thinkin is what you meant.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Lovely darling, that's exactly how I am feeling today.

I think if you wrote more of these short pieces, it will fine-tune the kinds of thing your creativity is meant to say. Bravo!

[Sourav]

Nice... I wish if you wold have added one more stanza at least... but the message is very good.

[Coyote Poetry]

True wisdom in the poem. Must find the light and the way out. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Philip Smith]

Nice, I thought about the last line and played with "It's about what you find inside" The hole could mean so many things. Good job Claire