Home, safe

A storm outside

Rain pounding on the glass of my window

The dull sound of the wind

Shaking a frenetic ballet of leaves and trees

 

A cup of hot tea to my lips

Hidden away inside a sweet blanket

Next to the warmth of a quiet fire

There’s nothing in the world that makes me feel

As safe

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

The poem is just as warm and comforting as the subject. A bright flame of security swaddling us in a heated sigh. But my favorite line: "Shaking a frenetic ballet of leaves and trees"-- A requiem or larghetto of shivers and howls from the winds rustling leaves. Beautiful.

[Seshat Nidaba]

Too sweet, I haven't read poetry this feminine, in a LONG time. My gawd, the lines are tender.

It's cliche and yet you pull over a wool of magic, that makes me go 'who cares if its' cliche'.

[Forest Green]

Pretty thoughts, delightfully transcribed.

Nice work...!

[cfix]

Such a comforting and peaceful write. Enjoyed this.

[OR]

From your poetry the reader can know all and nothing about you and that what makes you in my opinion a great poet...
Good work

[just is]

This is a very lovely write, well expressed as well.

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u always express emotions so sweetly.
a very beautiful & lovely painting (: