A love involuntary

I felt you

Instantly, inside of me

And I never experienced

Such overwhelming love

For any other being before

 

I remember feeling so

So surprised

Like I never thought

Such an emotion could spring

From within my heart

 

So soft and warm

And it surrounds you

And fills you

And suddenly

The world summarizes 

To you and me

 

Just you and me

 

A love involuntary

Unplanned

But the thought of holding you

And tears could already fall down

On my smiling face

 

As this bound is as pure

As you are heaven

And you suddenly become

The most precious thing

To me

 

How hurtful

That my heart would feel complete

Ready 

And in love

Before I even got the time

To realize the consequences

Of your presence

 

How painful

When in my mind

The decision already comes

Obvious and sharp

That I have to let you go 

Reviews

[c.m.]

Just you and me

A love involuntary
Unplanned
But the thought of holding you
And tears could already fall down
On my smiling face

As this bound is as pure
As you are heaven
And you suddenly become
The most precious thing
To me

This is a beautiful poem. I try to illustrate love, and it seems I've been beat once again. It's sad, but oh so wonderful at the same time. Great job Claire.

[James Bonner]

This is beautifully baleful. You describe Something lost and something gained so well the reader forgets that there might be a difference.

[Tainted Devotion]

This is absolutely breath taking and beautiful. You've written this very well and painted a perfect picture of what love was at the time. But it was sad at the same time cause we never really know when that love will truly leave.

[Gomer LePoet]

Sweet, beautiful and so sad. No one knows when that someone will come from nowhere and fill a void so exquisitely, or when that love can be more distructive then truly anticipated.

[A.Lee]

I love this. Sometimes love just comes completely involuntarily and sometimes we fall in love before we realize that we shouldn't have. Its hard to break away from that. Nice work. I love the feeling in this poem.

[vincentbals]

Nicely written ... letting go peopel is one of the hardest things ever, but when you really love the person, i think we all should accept their decision. i don't know ...

anyway, i enjoyed reading it! thanks.

[Ashley June Canfield]

awh this is really pretty :]

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I love the way u start with this work..
calm, n then the tune start to change, and by the end, u give the sad or bad ending..

I like it..

[mmzx]

I remember feeling so
So surprised
Like I never thought
Such an emotion could spring
From within my heart

i bet everyone experienced this but just finds it hard to pen it down.
you've done it beautifully.
good job!
(:

[Randolf Ramos]

This is the greatest feeling when we are in love. Great write.