December

December

A Poem by Elwina

It was December

My favourite month

When the days are short

And the nights sparkle with lights

 

When our noses are cold

But our hearts are warm

And we are wrapped up

Under blankets and scarfs

 

It was softly that I felt it

Didn’t really chose it

It was hour after hour

Night after night

 

Within a week or two

We would lock in my room

Where we’d talk and dream

Eyes towards the stars

 

It was sat on my bed

The conversation we shared

That you’d turn out to be

The best friend I ever had

 

However you have changed

Even if this part of you is dead

I’ll always remember the man

You were that Christmas

 

You were pure and raw

As beautiful as the snow

As bright as

A sunrise

 

Whoever you are today

Whatever you do or say

How often you disrespect

Or defile those nights

 

I’ll always remember you

With my heart light, but a little blue

As you turned out to be

The best weeks I ever had

© 2010 Elwina


Author's Note

Elwina
Photo credit : http://www.flickr.com/photos/hyphy_shots/3176943753/

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"You were pure and raw
As beautiful as the snow
And as bright as
A sunrise

Whoever you are today
Whatever you do or say
How often you disrespect
Or defile those nights

I’ll always remember you
With my heart light, but a little blue
As you turned out to be
The best weeks I ever had"

{this poem is just full of lovely imagery-but i love these last verses}

...what a magnificent poem...

james:-)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Whoever you are today
Whatever you do or say
How often you disrespect
Or defile those nights

I’ll always remember you
With my heart light, but a little blue
As you turned out to be
The best weeks I ever had

That's awesome...heartbreaking. I loved this poem...I love December and winter and all that it is. Lovely poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"You were pure and raw
As beautiful as the snow
And as bright as
A sunrise

Whoever you are today
Whatever you do or say
How often you disrespect
Or defile those nights

I’ll always remember you
With my heart light, but a little blue
As you turned out to be
The best weeks I ever had"

{this poem is just full of lovely imagery-but i love these last verses}

...what a magnificent poem...

james:-)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I’ll always remember you
With my heart light, but a little blue
As you turned out to be
The best weeks I ever had

Love this last stanza, it's amazing,
nice expressable feelinsg here.
Sad write, but well written.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Elwina
Elwina

Belgium



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My feet are in Europe (most of the time). My dreams take me everywhere. I love to write. It helps me being centered and travelling through my inner world. If you have to read one piece from me, .. more..

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