Time standing still

I’m out to space
Where time is standing still
Shipped out to a place
That looks like my dreams
Where I can be myself
Where I am just no longer lost
Where I can be complete
And it’s all magic and love

The air is crystal pure
As you take me away
We are travelling on a cloud
Flying over the bay
It takes us higher and higher
Deep into the sky
It’s just us and the moon
And the shooting stars

Drinking your lips
Breathing your scent
I’m starting to give in
As I touch your hands
I’m drunk, oh I could drown
This is so dangerous for me
Falling into this passion
That captivates me

I found you
Behind the shadows, the stories
I read you
Behind the lies and the theories
I see your heart and soul
Behind the fears and the maybes
You are the one
That no one can see
Don’t ask me how I do it
But I do
I see your soul in an instant

And it pierces me through
I might as well be blind
To the rest of the world
I might as well 'd been bound
To your heart all along
And all I want to look at
Is you over and over
All I want is to stay here
Come closer and closer

Don’t take this feeling away
Don’t take this universe away from me
The sun is rising
And I can’t get my eyes off you
It’s early morning
But I can’t pull away
Holding my breath
To keep this longer
Come on, take me back
Grab me harder
Don’t leave so fast
Hold your breath with me
Please make this last
And leave me happy

Reviews

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"Don’t take this feeling away
Don’t take this universe away from me
The sun is rising
And I can’t get my eyes off you"
...this is such a wonderful write-
God-i could quote this entire piece--
really--this is beautiful mood imagery!!!:-)
i really Love this!!!

james:-)

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Wow beauty of poetry with such passion to the words that have been written, good work.

[Antonio Valentino]

Claire, my gosh, this is so beautiful! What wonderful writing, I'm glad I got to read it, thank you for sharing it with us.

Antonio :)

[happy girl]

That was a really pretty poem, which had a great flow. i like the way you put the verses together.l it was, once again, a very beautiful poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is amazing. The feeling and desire to keep a good feeling alive is strong in your words. I like the feel and strong emotion in this poem. The ending was perfect. A person hold on tight to the sweet moments as long as they can. A excellent poem.
Coyote