Love Or Nothing

Tell me why is my life,
Is still living on,
After what happen,
On that day when you where gone,
The things we promised,
And the words that we said,
Are no where to be found,
They where left for dead,
The door is open,
For you to walk in,
And I keep dreaming of you,
Over and over again,
I wish you where here,
I'm just waiting for you,
You where a part of me,
I don't know what to do,
Your voice is in my head,
I'm lost of any word,
But the phone never rang,
And no messages has been heard,
I'm caught in this dream,
It was just me all alone,
But it was for real,
And still never heard the phone,
If you could here with me now,
I would be holding your hand,
And tearing over you,
And watch the sun descend,
And see the stars,
Finally disappear,
And loving you,
For being here,
But here right now,
I wish from the start,
That you would have stayed,
But you will stay in my heart....         

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

This was different but I could feel the sadness yet warmth of love from this. You did a relly good job and you should keep writing pieces like this, even though some of them are sad. If I didn't say it before, I really like your writing. :)