You Are My Heaven

My love for you,
Has a pounding sound,
Of a thunder storm,
That's coming in,
And each in every beat,
Says it all,
Of how I feel,
And how I love you,
I can say it now,
But love is better off,
Without any words,
You're me only love,
My forever,
And the stars shine,
Just like heaven,
And the way you smile,
Brightens the world,
And all around,
Those beautiful sounds,
Just like your voice,
When you talking,
And I can't say,
Not a word,
Cause all I heard,
Was heaven around me,
There's nothing else,
To tell you more,
If I could go back in time,
I would do it all again,
I love you so,
You are my heaven.......         

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

"When you talking,
And I can't say,"
I think it should be "you're" but maybe that's how it's supposed to be. You did a good job though, I realy like this piece.