Jorie's Song

Pictures that we keep on reminiscing,
Bitter, yet abiding in the feeling,
Wonderfully brewed coffee and tea,
Soothing the warmth of what's once called glee,
There are parts that will always be missing,
Not unconsciously longing for something,
Been asking myself, "what happened to me?"
Left with a scar like it was stung by a bee,
But it's not that heavy in the feeling,
When time literally changed everything,
Will remain a bittersweet memory,
Feeling ecstatic, wanting to breakfree.

Reviews

[The Daisy]

When readers get the emotions you try to convey that's a success!!!

[wordman]

a bitter sweet memory,i guess the worst kind
i wrote one called bitter sweet memories