Je Dis Aime

Just some random writing..

When I think of you

My mind is at ease

I can finally breathe

The way you speak

It makes me weak

When you smile

My heart goes wild

The way you look at me

I can finally see

All my troubles and fears

Fade away

When I'm with you

You make me feel alive

When I was almost dead

Author's Note

Just some random writing. It's very cliche, I know. Please tell me what you think, and be brutally honest so I can improve.

Reviews

[Josh]

This is sweet.

[SilentDreamer]

I really like it. It has good flow. And I don't see anything wrong with it so there's no need to be brutally honest because with this as far as I can see it's really good! So great job and keep writing.

[Zerro]

:) it reminds me of someone i care deeply for thank you Please continue

[Bubo]

The flow is spot on, and the emotion is all there......the sadness is that one feels so tired of life, but lifted by love,Beautiful!