What Happened?

What Happened?

A Poem by Cinu~
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The final poem I've written today in school...

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I don’t know what did it
Caused her to feel like it wasn’t working
I gave her gifts, my utmost attention
But every so often, “awkward silences” were lurking
 
Times were great
We had fun
Then one day things changed
And Now our time is done
 
As I sit here
Healing and breaking
I start to think if it’s something I did,
Giving instead of taking?
 
I wonder if it was different
If I had not complained so much
I think I should have listened more
So I could heal her, and keep in touch
 
So if that day ever came
On which she’d come back to me
I would kindly decline
And go back down to the road to see…
“What Happened?

© 2009 Cinu~


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