Lies
A Poem by
CindyLu
Words
That
drip
Like
acid
From
my tongue
Lies
That fill
The holes
In my truth
Graceful dancer
On my lips
Do you really believe
The things I say?
© 2012 CindyLu
Reviews
I love this. Beautifully written and lovely structure:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I'm not such why but I found this very ironic and pleasing, with a good structure and fluency
Posted 11 Years Ago
I'm not such why but I found this very ironic and pleasing, with a good structure and fluency
Oooh! I really like this one. ^_^ It flows perfectly. ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oooh! I really like this one. ^_^ It flows perfectly. ;)
Nice format. A well thought poetic message for why lies have no real value when spoken by the liars of all walks of life. Nice job. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice format. A well thought poetic message for why lies have no real value when spoken by the liars of all walks of life. Nice job. :)
What a wonderfully crafted poem! So great, i read it a few times to soak it all in!
Posted 11 Years Ago
What a wonderfully crafted poem! So great, i read it a few times to soak it all in!
great job:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
great job:)
Should I believe the things you say -_-
Lol good job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Should I believe the things you say -_-
Lol good job!
I really like this! I love how the poem goes into a dip its wonderful keep it up!
Posted 11 Years Ago
I really like this! I love how the poem goes into a dip its wonderful keep it up!
small poem with a big influence! keep it up :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
small poem with a big influence! keep it up :D
Lies are a different truth,though never questioned for yet answered nonetheless.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lies are a different truth,though never questioned for yet answered nonetheless.
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CindyLu VA
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Hey, I'm Cindy. I like to write, but I'm not that good. I write as a therapuetic and recreational sort of thing. I'm kinda familiar with this site and the people on here because my friend Li (Lina Gre..
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