Lies

Words

That drip

Like acid

From my tongue

Lies

That fill      

     The holes                 

In my truth                              

 

 

Graceful dancer

On my lips

 

Do you really believe

The things I say?

Reviews

[luna11]

I love this. Beautifully written and lovely structure:)

[SlightlyOdd]

I'm not such why but I found this very ironic and pleasing, with a good structure and fluency

[InsanityWriter]

Oooh! I really like this one. ^_^ It flows perfectly. ;)

[B-poet]

Nice format. A well thought poetic message for why lies have no real value when spoken by the liars of all walks of life. Nice job. :)

[Natasha]

What a wonderfully crafted poem! So great, i read it a few times to soak it all in!

[marie]

great job:)

[Christopher Booyakasha]

Should I believe the things you say -_-
Lol good job!

[~Beautiful Dreamer~]

I really like this! I love how the poem goes into a dip its wonderful keep it up!

[Muhammad Qasim]

small poem with a big influence! keep it up :D

[Acropolix]

Lies are a different truth,though never questioned for yet answered nonetheless.