The Observer

Written 24th October 2011

I sit on the sidelines

I look down from high

Rushing by me

They are sterile, they flow

I see it all

I am friend to none

I am but a shadow

Forgotten at the turn

I know what will happen

I know what they are

The one who can fathom

Where every path goes

Sometimes I may envy

And wish for their ignorance

But I am the one

And I see all significance

Reviews

[Gilad Levanon]

This is a clever way of capturing a new perspective of the 'higher power' we all talk about. And I believe it is much more accurate than many people might think. Funnily enough, my own experience has shown me that to watch the world without drawing conclusions or inventing judgments, as the Observer does, affords one the opportunity to begin to see the world with its' significance, as the Observer does. Well done.

[kW]

Very nice writing style.......loved it :)

[SuddenCognito]

Very good :) It shows a different perspective.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wonderfully written, inspiring write. Nicely done!