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You play the troubled boy so well

But we can all see through our blindfolds

That mask does you no good

And our eyes work just fine

 

We know what you are

And the intentions you have

And that image you portray

Will not last forever

 

Just give it up

Because your secret is no longer safe

 

You've been found out.

 

Reviews

[Michael]

Very good work here. It is simple but powerful. I just hope that its fiction and not a person you had to take to task.

[Kiara]

very interesting poem "you've been found out" my favorite line........great write

[Eldee]

This was very interesting, it would make an absolutely amazing story starter :)
I loved the first stanza, it flowed, had character, and dragged the reader in. The second stanza found my attention drifting a bit though. I like the consecutive use of "and the", but the third line sort of puzzled me as it led into the forth.

Then I loved the end of the poem :) Good job!