What You See...

What You See...

A Poem by Laylani Mullane
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My outlook on love in 5 words

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You see sin...
I don't.

© 2008 Laylani Mullane


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You got that right.... It's the point of view, not the thing you're looking at that makes it the way it is.
I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Much left to interpretation....even more left for imagination...

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. It says so much in so few words. Leaving volumes unspoken between the lines. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

These five words can actually say a lot. I like it. ~Liv

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2008
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Laylani Mullane
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For me poetry is about emotion, and most of the time when I write I try not to edit too much, if at all, because I believe that it'll only dimish the emotion. For the last few years writing has helpe.. more..

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