Body of Water

There is a pond on my pillow

and a lake on my cheek.

The is a river in my eyes,

that flows too deep.

There is no life in my ocean,

but there is emotion to spare.

For this body of water,

Is nothing but tears.

Reviews

[Érenn]

Brevity seems to be a feature in your poetry .(I can only try) The imagery is vivid. It's a very emotional and thought provoking write and I like it much Thank you for sharing

[Randhir kaur]

Waooo..A thought provoking write..very vivid and touching. I quote"There is no life in my ocean" was my favorite line. Nicely penned...

[J.Michele]

Oh my goodness, what a powerful and very emotional poem. I love it! :)

[hcarson]

What can i say bookworm...another fantastiv piece. I love ur writing. Short and to the point in such a discriptive manner, fab :)

[BookWorm]

Thank you! I've been getting such good feedback from people, this is what keeps me writing. Thank you again!!

[hcarson]

I was actually talking to my partner about you and your writing. So glad you decided to share it, its far too good to be locked away.

[BookWorm]

Wow, that's amazing! I don't even think my stuff is that good I literally just started writing poetry, for recreational purposes, in like the last two months

[hcarson]

It seems its something your meant to do, comes natural to you. I enjoy it, find it relaxing,i have a lot to learn tho and i find this site really good in helping progression.You will go far, your very talented naturally it seems.