Weak

When your trust has been broken

you Hold me and you Tell me that everything’s Okay.

i Trust you and i Believe you, so my Fear goes away.

Every word you say to me, i Love and i Cherish.

i Tell you that the day You Leave Me is the day

I Shall Perish.

so Tell why it is

You thought i’d be Fine.

that You could Close the Door

and Leave Me Behind.

Tell why it is

My Cries were not Heard,

that My Tears were not Seen,

that Your head did not turn.

now I can see that Your smile was False,

that Your Love was not Pure,

and Your Heart, at a Cost.

but Still i Lay here,

sleeping in Dirt.

because the Pain You have caused Me,

has rendered me Inert.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

This is wonderful.i enjoyed reading it quite well. Very nice. Falsehoods hurt alot broken promises. The cut very deep and leave scars that reminds us of the past which sometime hurts our future. Well done and you dont have to write what othervpeiple want right what you feel like because if they dont like you its to bad for them now is it not?

[Peter Rogerson]

You say, in your biography bit, that being 17 you probably appeal more to teenagers than old fogies like me, Well, I'll let you into a secret: I'm in my 70s but I was a teenager once and I can remember those good old days quite clearly and, yes, your excellent little poem does speak to me. Oh dear. That's let the cat out of the bag ... it must be my 2nd teenagerhood!!!

[BookWorm]

lol thank you so much!! I wasn't sure what people liked, only what kids my age like, but im so glad you liked it too. Thank you!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I love the structure and detail in it! Awesome in all. Please read my work. Thank you.