Words

When someone you care about hurts you....

I am a fragile one

Words can bring me down

You have the loudest voice

It still follows me around

Your words are like a knife

And I am only skin

So when you start to speak

I feel the knives sink in

I don't shed my tears

I keep my smile

But when you leave

I'm quiet for awhile

For I have no words

There is nothing to say

Because the words you have spoken

Have taken mine away

Reviews

[hcarson]

this is excellent, really liked it, its to the point (excuse the pun), you don't mess about with the words you have just got em out there, done! love it, look forward to seeing more of your work. (ps, age is irrelevant when ur reading good stuff so dont worry about that, your writing will appeal to most regardless of age if it all as good as this)

[BookWorm]

Thank you so much, I was so nervous about posting stuff on here, especially my poems. Thank you!!

[hcarson]

No problem, thought it was grate, really appealed to me :)